ekaterinn: (merry christmas!  (by monanotlisa))
ekaterinn ([personal profile] ekaterinn) wrote2005-12-25 02:06 pm

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Happy Christmas, Happy Hanukkah, Happy Holidays to all of you! I'm finally settling down to read [livejournal.com profile] yuletide before dinner, including the story written for me: Make Me An Offer which is a NERO WOLFE story! I'm so excited!

In the meantime, I wanted to post this Stargate: Atlantis story. It's short, just over 500 words and not obviously holiday-themed, but I wrote it with the idea of coming home for Christmas:


The corridors were bare and quiet; only the murmur of the engines accented the sound of John's footsteps as he made his way down B deck. He sometimes felt that the Dedalus was much too big in a way that Atlantis wasn't, but then he had always preferred the puddlejumpers and cloudhoppers. Or maybe he was just feeling a little restless, a little tired. It had been a long trip, and pretty much the only thing John had got out of it was the confirmation that he didn't fit in on Earth anymore. He wasn't sure how a whole planet can feel awkward and strange, like riding his old ten-speed after he got his driver's license, but his uncertainty didn't stop it from being true.

It was midnight and they were a few hours out from Atlantis. All he wanted to do is sleep, forget the briefings and the reports for a while. He turned right at the corner, keyed in the passcode and stepped in through the door. When he flicked on the light, the figure on the bed made a noise. John smiled and dimmed the light. Ten years and a policy change had brought him this: Rodney curled up on his bed, snoring softly. John shucked off his uniform and went into the tiny bathroom to brush his teeth. When he was done, he splashed water on his face, staring at himself in the mirror. The grey at his temples still surprised him, though Rodney took every chance he had to tease him about it. The scar, running diagonally down his right cheek, was less unexpected, although Rodney had never cracked a joke about it. But he would sometimes trace the scar with his finger and then kiss it, as if to make it better. Leaving thoughts of old battles behind, John walked back into the main room of the cabin.

Rodney had shifted on the bed, and John saw that he had fallen asleep clutching his open laptop. Gently, he pried Rodney's fingers away from it, prompting a sigh from the scientist. Ever since Rodney's hands had been burned (and healed), they had been even more sensitive, responding to the lightest of John's touches. He closed the laptop and placed it on the desk, moving a stack of reports (his) and three empty coffee mugs (Rodney's) to one side. He yawned, and blinked at the clock on the bedside table. The lights flashed 12:23, and John climbed into bed, nudging Rodney so that he would move over a bit more.

Rodney's body was solid and warm next to his. John slung his arm over Rodney's shoulder, suddenly glad of the tight quarters. He found Rodney's mouth in the dark, and kissed it, skin-hungry and bone-tired. Closing his eyes, he breathed in Rodney, sweat and the bad ventilation in the Dedalus's lab and just the hint of coffee. In the morning, he would see the lights of Atlantis though the small cabin window, welcoming them home, home.

[identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
That's lovely.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you!
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[identity profile] toniabarone.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful piece. Thanks for this.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you - I'm so glad you liked!

[identity profile] mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
This is really lovely. Just the way I like to imagine their future. Thank you.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:53 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

Just the way I like to imagine their future.

Me too - I'm really glad you liked! Thank you!

[identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Great little piece. :)

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:53 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ^_^

[identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, lovely. Happy Holidays *g*

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you! Happy Holidays to you too!

[identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Nice 'verse. Loved how you managed to convey their whole life in just four paragraphs.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you so much - I'm really glad you got the sense of their whole story out of my few pitful words. ^^

[identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
*happy, contented sigh*
Perfect. :D

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you - I'm really glad you liked!

[identity profile] threequarters.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, so warm and comfortable. What a lovely snapshot!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles*

Oh, so warm and comfortable.

That's just what I was aiming for! Thank you!

[identity profile] daraq.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
What a lovely Christmas gift - thank you!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you - I'm glad you liked!

[identity profile] daraq.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Do you have your SGA stories collected anywhere? I'd like to recommend them and it's easier when they're all in one place.

I really enjoy your work - thank you, again!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-28 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. *blushes madly* I post all my fic on [livejournal.com profile] ekaterinn_words, my fanfiction journal. You can find all my SGA fic here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/ekaterinn_words/tag/sga+fic).
Thanks so much for the rec!

[identity profile] lillyjk.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 04:25 am (UTC)(link)
yes yes yes, exactly as it should be. so much love for this.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Oh, wow, thank you! I'm so happy you liked it!

[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 08:52 am (UTC)(link)
Sweetly domestic-lovely-thanks.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

[identity profile] misty4me.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice, I like the glimpses of what they've gone through, and that they've survived so long.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:12 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* I'm glad you liked the glimpses of their shared history. Thank you!

[identity profile] laceymcbain.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet and lovely. Thanks for sharing this.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

[identity profile] ruggerdavey.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
That was really great. I realy liked the way John revealed their future.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm really glad you liked the glimpspes of their shared history!
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[personal profile] astolat 2005-12-26 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, this just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. *cuddles the present* Happy holidays!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:17 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes madly* I'm so happy you liked it! Happy holidays to you too!
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[identity profile] crystalheaven.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
OMG! Sleepy cuddling is like one of my favorite things about this parings, and you wrote it so damn good! *snuggles up with boys*

I so love this fic.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:21 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you so much!

*snuggles up with boys*

Oh, *yeah*. I love sleepy cuddling too (the image of Rodney clutching his laptop in his sleep and then being clutched at by John instead was part what inspired this fic. I'm so glad you think I did the image justice!

[identity profile] barely-bean.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
aww, I especially loved the bit about Rodney kissing the scar on his face. This was lovely.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you!

I especially loved the bit about Rodney kissing the scar on his face

And I'm really glad you liked that bit!

[identity profile] neery.livejournal.com 2005-12-29 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, nice. I love happy, hopeful future fics like that. Beautiful, thanks.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-30 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you!

I love happy, hopeful future fics like that.

I like to think I'm making up for Atlantis in Tatters with this. *g* I'm very glad you liked!

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-12-29 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so lovely, like a warm fuzzy blanket and I want to just wrap myself up in it. Thank you so much for the happy!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2005-12-30 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
like a warm fuzzy blanket and I want to just wrap myself up in it.

Oh, that's a wonderful way to put it! Thank you so much!

[identity profile] crimsonclad.livejournal.com 2005-12-30 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm, this is looooovely. hooray!

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2006-01-02 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you1

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2006-01-14 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely! Thank you.

[identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com 2006-01-18 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thanks! I'm glad you liked!

[identity profile] trinityofone.livejournal.com 2006-01-21 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful. I'm sad that it took me so long to find it, but glad because tonight it was the perfect thing at the perfect time. I adore futurefic, and this one was just lovely.

[identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com 2006-03-21 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
This is a sweet story to read before going to bed. I have a nice, happy feeling to fall asleep with.