Beta help? Also, a meme. Ba!

Would anyone be willing to beta a fic I'm writing for the current ds_flashfiction challenge? It's about 1700 words of F/K (kinda). *makes Dief eyes*

Also, a meme, because narie tagged me. My six current favourite songs (sorry, I don't have links):

1. Bright Eyes - Another Travelin' Song
I will, I won't/I doubt, I don't/I'm not surprised/But I never feel quite prepared

2. Something Corporate - I Woke Up In A Car
She wrote me a letter from San Diego/To qualify her luck/These flights connect through Arizona/But I think I'll stay stuck

3. Coheed & Cambria - Three Evils
And you'll listen to reason/When you're face down in the dirt

4. Dashboard Confessional - Vindicated
Defence is paper thin/Just one touch and I begin

5. Libertines - Don't Look Back Into The Sun
She'll never forgive you, but she won't let you go

6. Counting Crows - Mrs. Potter's Lullaby
Well I woke up in mid-afternoon/Because that's when it all hurts the most

aishuu, bejiin, alimaaneal, rowandruid, narnia_girl, fanelia_angel, you're TAGGED.

And,finally, it is really nice to be able to laze about for once - though I would like to note, for the record, that me aishuu do go outside sometimes. Maybe even twice a day! *grins*