*laughs* I guess I've got a guilty conscience! I'm alive, just swamped by work. I fly back to LA on the 10th, so I'll be free to chat about fic then. *g* *mutters three papers and a presentation, gah*
Hi there. Just something I noticed in "Atlantis in tatters," and I don't know if you still want beta or not, but you have this tiny irregularity: "When shield fell." Did you want the plural on "shields," or was that singularity intentional?
But, uh, yeah. Teeeeeeny irregularity. The rest is gorgeous.
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Date: 2005-11-18 02:37 am (UTC)Hot date tomorrow night? Like... 6:30 to queue for 7:30?
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Date: 2005-11-24 05:48 am (UTC)But, uh, yeah. Teeeeeeny irregularity. The rest is gorgeous.
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